eaglewing's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Champion 21]

Well made for a beta, but needs some tweaking

The only flaw I see is that the Ace should replace the 1 card. If possible, you should also have a way to only draw four of the same card, so as you draw, it becomes less likely to draw the same card. Also the more familiar name is "Blackjack". If you find a way to make two cards draw in the beginning and check if they are a Blackjack, that would also be cool.

Of course, like I said, for a start it's well done.

JackAstral responds:

Thanks for all the feed back :D
I'll look into some of the things you mentioned- I really appreciate it ;)

[killing 4 no reason]

Try again

Spend a lot more time on your flashes. Make them more interactive. Make them look better too. Those were extremely basic stick figures, and possibly the reason you almost got blammed. You know actionscript, and that's good, but you need to focus more on the art first.

walterwagner responds:

i wil thanx

[Black'n'Orange]

Good, but glitched

The hit area for the death spaces is way too big, other than that, good game.

AwokerR responds:

hum... thanks. :]

[The Greatest Orb]

It's ok

It's been done before, but you did it well. The only things I would suggest are:

1. Check the hit area for the arrows. They count as a loss een when you dont hit them.

2. Try something to prevent right clicking.

MonoFlauta responds:

ok thanks...

[Sonny]

Almost playable

All you need to o is make the first boos beatable. You get stunned every single turn. The only reason I'm giving you any stars at all for this game is because it ad a good plot, a good battle system, good music, and graphics. You forgot the only important thing in games though. This game is harder than Dragon's Lai. At least Dragon's Lair had some wa to beat it but this is just luck. I dont are f this is the top rated game on Newgrounds. I don't are if it gets favorited by everyone on the siteIf you on't fix that problem, this will always be an unplayable game.

Krinn responds:

This game is beatable, a lot of people have beaten it. Which boss are you talking about? If you mean the ZPCI trio, they can only stun you once every 8 turns or longer, since their move is on a cooldown. Try again buddy, just hang in there, i'm sure you can find a way to beat those bosses.

Thanks
krin

[Avoidance]

almost flawless

Had some good mazes. A little sound might have helped. And a little something to keep people from right clicking maybe. Maybe having a background button that makes you lose when you touch it at alpha zero so its see through. a little too many levels in between checkpoints, but that can easily be fixed.

All in all, a great game that'll help thousands in their search for games so they won't be bored.

ciaren-c responds:

thanks for the comment I just wanted to know how to do the right click action because I havent seen it in the actions panel.