eaglewing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[gaymovie2.swf]

really bad

What killed it was the popping noise the mic made. Get a better one or talk into the side. Do more than one recording if you have to. Just make the audio better.

[lo ridah]

so glitchy

he's driving the wrong way and the turning around near the beginning looks like it was in paper mario. try harder.

RobertClock responds:

your mom.

[Everybody Love Mario Kart]

Change the intro. otherwise it's good

The intro is poorly animated, but the idea of it is what made the flash how good it was. I was ready to close this thing and blam it, but I see how wrong I was. This was great "I would have expected this from Bowser or banana brains over there but from you? I could have been killed!" Great work.

[Cat Face ep.2]

Good

The only change is the intro. It makes it look like that's the movie. Plus when you think of the other animation you do that are like that (but still good) it would make sense that people would think that it's the whole movie. Just a thought. Good otherwise.

[Not-The-Final Fantasy XII]

You made a funny game even funnier

My favorite part was when you mentioned the moogle and Balthier. The twin brother was also funny. And of course, everyone hates Vaan. His stomache looks like he hasn't eaten in days. Runescape is also basically a mediocre final fantasy so it makes it funnier. This movie is actually better than decline 1. Not declines 2 or 3, but definately.

Bobert-Rob responds:

Yeah, his stomach... I mean, they tried to make him look like he's starving or whatever, yet they STILL give him a damn six pack... I mean, how can he work out like that if he's starving? Makes no sense. Thanks for the comment!

[Blip]

no sound

no sound does not a good movie make. make it with sound and it might just upgrade from shit to mediocre.

wilker responds:

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Was going to let the tune loop throughout the flash but I'd made the mistake of using scenes, making looping the music choppy.

You're right, though, would be better with sound.

[The Pesant's Revenge]

Good but needs work

First, why is the guy smiling when he runs? Also, the voices could be clearer. Overall it's good though.

[The Nut Job (part 2)]

Funny

That is some funny stuff right there. The graphics were incredible, as if each frame took days to do. Good storyline too. Nice timing with the music.

By the way, was there by any chance an Invader Zim reference in the scene where they decide to destroy the place?

[Mario vs Bowser]

Practice more.

First off, I saw the first one and you made a few excuses about how you were new. Then how come this is the exact same as the last one? Add sound, dammit! Even a tiny *blip* noise when the speech balloons come up are ok. Also, stop doing everything in 1 layer. I saw the background move constantly. Take a tutorial and realize that good flashes are never made in such a short timeframe. Take some time on your flash and have more than one layer. Sound is key in an animation so you'll need that too. Also, you might want a text box or something to put the text in. Maybe some button to make it continue too. Most people can't read that fast. Finally, make a preloader. That can easily be done by learning 4 basic actionscript tools that can be taught in the tutorials.

[OrgLIX Stickers]

Never thought of that stuff

You captured the Nobodies' character perfectly, even if I sort of expected Sora to have a traumatized look. The idea of Demyx being the idiot was great too. I always considered him the dombest of the 13, even if he was the hardest to beat (Why the hell would it be game over for only knocking out a musical note and it being .5 seconds from death?). The thing with Diz was hilarious. I never thought he was yiff with Mickey. The best part out of all of them tough was the newest addition, Patrick.

Tetsubo responds:

Check out the main site to read up on the parodies of the characters and listen to many more episodes (in audio form only though), there are some great Demyx episodes and further 'yiff' references from DiZ whom I take no responsibility for.
It should be mentioned that I didn't write the script like I normally do for my projects, I only animated this so direct all writing and idea compliments to the lovely Orin Drake who created Patrick as well as provided the voice for it.