a little note
stop giving advice to dead people. let the dude sleep.
Can't wait till you make your next vid-oh wait.
Seriously, the irony is laughworthy.
There are a few things wrong, and a few things right.
First, thew animation itself was good. You obviously spent a lot of time on it.
Now for the bad parts:
As long as the person who supports the pairing isn't stupid about it, who really cares? The peanut's original purpose wasn't for peanut butter. Why should something only have one purpse.
You need to have him killing more than just Flaky. Also, she needs to be more in character.
That's about it. Your flash was run of the mill. Mediocre. Okay.
It had some good jokes, and although i was a little upset that There She Is didn't win, I think the jokes made it better.
Alright. Here are a few pointers
Make it longer
Make the intro shorter.
Add more sound.
That's it. Good otherwise.
change the dimensions and it'll be perfect. maybe some music.
good for a first
Very good for a first flash. You even know how to add a ghost effect. You have a lot of potential as a flash artist. TO be honest, your first flash is better than my most recent one and I've been practicing for 5 years.
A good classic
I have to say I wish you would do a fourth. I remember waiting for it four years ago when you released the teaser. The three idiot ninja movies are great in every way.
By the way, all three links on the bottom of the preloader are dead.
against the rules
hateful flashes are against the rules.
The only thing I would recommend is getting clearer audio. The popping noise is a little annoying. Other than that I really like it.
Yes, that was my fault. I am slowly getting to understand the audio limit that Flash allows.
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