a loop with a song is not a movie
its a person standing with his mouth opening and closing at a fixed rate and horrible lip syncing. It's a horrible example of a music video. Maybe next time, since you seem to be goodd at drawing, you should draw out the events happening in the song. you got a song to do that for too. this way youll have less of a chance of it failing. too late for this one
So does this pass or fail? The answer is an obvious
FAIL